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Tale of a Breaking Heart

April 26, 2010
By Anonymous

Do you always feel unfamiliar?
Though everybody seems similar

Do people always say to you
Nobody will ever love you?

Do you feel yourself hurting?
Before you see the bleeding?

Do you feel like you would die?
For one who is never by your side

Can you feel your heart breaking?
When you know you shouldn't be aching?

© Anonymous

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To Kei-Lyn my only love, please don't break my heart
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BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on May. 19 2010 at 10:42 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

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awwwwww!

this is an ahmazing poem! keep writing! (=

comment and rate mine? THANKS ! (=

mikeytogo SILVER said...
on May. 17 2010 at 11:28 pm
mikeytogo SILVER, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Scat man, fat man, black and white and brown man, tell me &#039;bout the color of your soul.&quot;- Scat man.

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This is excatly how i feel.......
iknowyourheart BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 4:39 pm
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;And I&#039;ll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I&#039;ve found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I&#039;ve lost everything.&quot;-mayday parade

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My God. AMEN!!! 
invasion-of-the-asians BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 11:47 am
invasion-of-the-asians BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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keep on keeping on

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aw that is so sweet. i love it when guys write poems. especially when its a sweet one for another girl. too bad i've never actually dated a guy sweet enough to do something like that for me... we need more guys like you in the world!!! lol
MetalChick93 BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 9:39 am
MetalChick93 BRONZE, West Harisson, Indiana
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Love is as beautiful as a wild rose, calm and giving, but willing to draw blood in it&#039;s defense. - Mark Olsen

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omg this had so much feeling and emotion to it, you could feel yourself in the story the writer was portraying...i know exactly how it feels to have your heart break.... all i can say is that time's the best healer. i loved this poem, it was so sad and sweet. definitely one of my favs.
trumpetgirl711 said...
on May. 16 2010 at 10:05 pm
trumpetgirl711, Tucson, Arizona
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wow! Awesome poem!
Goober said...
on May. 16 2010 at 6:46 pm
this is a great poem I'm glad I got to read it.
Courtnay BRONZE said...
on May. 16 2010 at 5:35 pm
Courtnay BRONZE, McDonald, Ohio
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WOW!!!this is really good.....i luv'd it!!!<3
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 16 2010 at 1:45 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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this is really good-nice job!!!!!
Clementine SILVER said...
on May. 15 2010 at 9:27 pm
Clementine SILVER, Gustavus, Alaska
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I can relate so much to the last to stanzas. I have recently felt my heart breaking, when I know it shouldn't even be aching. It's like when you love someone and they barely know you. You already feel attached, and you know you shouldn't already have fallen so hard.