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Good day gone Bad

June 2, 2010
By Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

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La la la la laaa
Isnt today a great day,
The suns shining,
The birds are chirping.
Ah today is really a good day
You told me im beautiful,
I bought a diamond bracelet

Then it changed

It started to Rain,
Lightning struck
It rained for hours,
You changed,
No more love
No more compliments,
Nada
It turned a good day to a horrible nightmare

© Jorrdyn K., Washougal, WA

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Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:28 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

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Thank you, this just came to me like most of the poems i write :)
LostAngel DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:11 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

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love the point. Wish you drew the poem out a little more but it's good either way :)