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Would You believe?

June 10, 2010
By mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no fire without smoke


Would you believe if all of a sudden a wave of wonder crashed over you?
If all of a sudden darkness loomed and everything was another world?
If all of a sudden you were floating suspended in space?
If all of a sudden everything you never had was around you?
If all of a sudden you realized what life was and realized you have never been living?
If all of a sudden colors clashed and you realized you have never been seeing?
If all of a sudden your body tingled and you realized you have never been feel
If all of a sudden the worlds heartbeat was heard and you realized you have never been alive?
Then all of a sudden reality crashes and you realize you were dreaming?


The author's comments:
I was inspired by math class. I was so utterly bored i just started writing and words seemed to come out of no were.

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mask456 GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 6:26 pm
mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no fire without smoke

OH NO i just saw that its feeling! Not feel! oh oopps

mask456 GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 6:26 pm
mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no fire without smoke

Thanks! An unxepcted death, hmm thats an intersting way of seeing it!

on Jul. 13 2010 at 6:16 pm
sky_is_womb BRONZE, Moorestown, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
All the soarings of my mind begin within my blood- Rilke

wow this is really interesting. it immediately made me think of an unexpected death, and how we should "always live like we'll die tomorrow" good job!

mask456 GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 1:20 pm
mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no fire without smoke

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