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Is It Over? (Pt. 7)

June 12, 2010
By celloizmylife PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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celloizmylife PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Around here, however, we don&#039;t look backwards for very long.<br /> We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things, because we&#039;re curious.....And curiosity keeps leading us down new paths.<br /> -Walt Disney

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Is it over?
That's a good question.
Will it ever be?
Who knows?
... I hoped I would.

Some say love heals,
But they lied.
Love is a fire.
I walked through with plenty of burns.

You've taken over me,
Filled up my head quite a lot.
Maybe someday I'll forgive things I can't change
But 'til then I'll just cry.

You've left me bent
And if you're gone
Will I learn from this
Or lose a piece of me?

You won't be mine
But I can't let you go.
So is it over,
Or is it just the beginning?

© John O., New City, NY

The author's comments:
This one's really cool in that, yes, it is my own work, but I have a bunch of song titles in the poem that express my feelings. Some are from favorite lines from songs (walking through fire without a burn, stuff like that). I just looked at the song titles of everything on my Ipod and this is the result.

I don't have anything else yet for the series of poems. Give it a few days.
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