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June 10, 2010
By Stargirl212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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"No matter how dark the sky, you'll always have the stars."

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You can rhyme,
those people,
pretending your a writer.

You say you mean it,
you say that it's all true,
that your writing from your soul.

You can't be.

Writing isn't rhyming,
it isn't the length,
or the words.

It's the feeling,
buried beneath the surface,
the stuff that really matters.

Because rhyming?
That's not writing.
Writing's more.

Deeper.

© Megan S., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
Lots of people believe that just putting words down on paper passes as writing. But I know real writers are a lot deeper.
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