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July 19, 2010
When I look up at the stars at night, I think about you...
The way you make me feel,
and our future together.
Your everything I could ever want and so much more.
Your blue eyes put me into a trance that is hard to escape,
I've never seen eyes so gorgeous.
Your touch sends chills through out my body.
Your voice is a soothing sound that always calms me down.
The word to describe it is perfect.
Theres nothing better,
It just feels right.
© Danielle C., Enumclaw, WA
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brysmarie12 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 5:12 pm
Oh my goodness I love this! :) It's easy to relate to, nice job! Maybe you could check out some of my work? I love the feedback and advice!
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 5:50 pm
awwww how cute, i kinda have a poem like this
lily_says_rawr GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:31 pm
This poem is really pretty. I don't usually like poems this short, but I like this one.
alaskatrailmutt said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:48 pm
Sure thing :D
christin.bass SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:51 am
It's beautiful. (:
alaskatrailmutt said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 2:18 pm
I ment like if you wanted to make it better XD lol! your welcome :)
alaskatrailmutt said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 9:43 am
I like it, I think you could expand apon it you where getting somewhere!!! :D Nice job!