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Irreversible

July 11, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.


Cradle my heart
Rock to sleep my mind
Please sooth my yearning soul
Don't abandon me to remain blind
I want this belonging peace
This story to which you've created
I seek my merrily deserved fairy-tale ending
I believe this is too far belated
I want the sun and moon
The fiery starts too which I see
I want the thrashing waters
Then the skies to which I breathe
I dream of the entire world
Protected in my sculpted palm
However, not even all the universe
Could excuse this heartbreak of your charm



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on Jun. 4 2011 at 5:15 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

I like it is the person in the last line saying that the other person broke they're heart or that they are so beautiful that it's heartbreaking?  It's really good I think!!!!!  I love the flow of the poem!!!!! If you can, can you please check out my work? Thax! :D