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To be a Goldfish

July 19, 2010
By kitkat9 BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
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To be a goldfish
Out if this world

To be a goldfish
Patterns are swirled

To be a goldfish
Not caring a bit

To be a goldfish,
How lucky is it?

© Flynn O., Novato, CA

The author's comments:
I just think it seems so sad to be a goldfish. I wrote all of the nice things about being a goldfish with a contradicting line at the end. I hope next time you have a choice that seems to have nothing but good outcomes, you think about it a little more
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