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July 31, 2010
By alpomp12 SILVER, Odenton, Maryland
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You said you needed me
I believed you
You said you loved me
I agreed with you
You said I meant so much
I said it back to you
You said I'll be true to you
I trusted you
But when you said goodbye to me
I let you

© Hui Y., Potsdam, NY

The author's comments:
This piece came to me when one of my friends and her boyfriend broke up and I decided to write a poem to give to her.
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