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MY WINDOW

August 3, 2010
By Bae12 GOLD, Denham Springs, Louisiana
Bae12 GOLD, Denham Springs, Louisiana
11 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
don\'t sell yourself so short


My window is there
just there
as it always has been.
Through the winter when snow covers the outside seal and coldness fogs it's glass.
Through the summers when the bright sun beams warm rays into my vacant room.
On the darkest rainy nights it plays drum as the water drops beat onto it's solid Payne.
It was there to see the nights when I would punch out it's screen and leave from it's locked protection.
And still it stands through hurricane and sleet,
strong but fragile my window is there
just there
as it always has been.



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Bae12 GOLD said...
on Sep. 2 2010 at 6:07 pm
Bae12 GOLD, Denham Springs, Louisiana
11 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
don\'t sell yourself so short

thank you so much for the good comment :) that's what keeps me writing:)

Bae12 GOLD said...
on Sep. 2 2010 at 6:05 pm
Bae12 GOLD, Denham Springs, Louisiana
11 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
don\'t sell yourself so short

thank you thank you thank you!!! :))))

on Sep. 1 2010 at 9:56 pm
yellowflower SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 47 comments
wow this was bery good you have a great sense of owrds and the way that it all flows was just amazing! keep writing

on Aug. 31 2010 at 6:23 pm
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
31 articles 0 photos 183 comments
this is a very well written poem! I really enjoy the concept of it, and the way you played the words, it is very good! keep it up!