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I'm Just Alone

August 22, 2010
By I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. &quot; ~ Cadet Maxim<br /> that&#039;s an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.


Your eyes were starstruck as you said goodbye.
You were the one i had always known.
I'm strong on the outside but inside I thought I'd die.
I'm just alone...

I watched you walk away.
No words from my lips were spoken.
There wasn't anything i could say.
You left me there with a piece of my heart broken.

I thought that day was the end.
Since that day my pain has only grown.
I don't know if i can cope with not being your friend.
I'm just alone...

My heart and all.
Hurt as it may be.
Took the fall.
You no longer care about me.

I need time to heal.
The gap you left is now sewn.
This nightmare is now real.
I am really alone...


The author's comments:
I didn't exactly write this poem from what I felt. I thought of how someone else would feel if one of their close friends left them. They would probably feel rejected and alone, but in time they would heal. So i used the perspective of someone else in this situation an went from there.

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bilbogirl GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2010 at 6:43 pm
bilbogirl GOLD, Townsend, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
If you cant rock it, dont even bother trying.

you're good at pulling on some heartstrings. i noticed you said you like to run, why don't you write something about how you feel when you're running?

But yeah, random request. This is good, come check out my poems plskthz:D


on Sep. 17 2010 at 1:09 am
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
15 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. &quot; ~ Cadet Maxim<br /> that&#039;s an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

If you read this please comment. I can't help writting an I wonder what people think about my poems. I an farely new to this site.