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Love is a suicide

September 10, 2010
By washburnlove BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
washburnlove BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today." - james dean


Love is a suicide,
in a place where everything is imaginary.
people are sinister.Oh! how i'd just rather die.
you said you would die if i left you alone.
well i've got news baby, in the future you are on your own.
i have been enveloped in a world full with odium, and in the end my strains are all in vain.

Love is a suicide,
in a time when conflict is critical.
war is the answer and our people have gone mad.
we have come to lose in this crusade of ourselves,
but believe me darling our sufferings have almost ended.

Love is a suicide,
in the chambers of our lust.
baby, we will have hell to pay.
this wicked, sardonic world will continue to haunt me.
only time will cure your pain,
otherwise you will follow suit.
Love is a suicide,
as more pre-mentioned,
that would be nice, and be light.
we lied to them and quite honestly i am ashamed,
the ways of our passion will burn with the rest of my soul,
but trust this dear one i will be back for vengance.


The author's comments:
when i worte this i was in a horrible downward spiral of depression. it was, originally, a suicide letter to a very close love. Life didnt work out the way i had expected it to. if it had these would have been my last words to the person who hurt me the most throughout my entire life.

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on Jun. 6 2011 at 8:33 pm
myLovelyFather GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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And that's the thing about the future. It's unknown, unknowable, but before you know it, you're there.

this inspires me. could you review any of my work please? im not very old and still have A LOT of growing (in ecery way lol, but mostly writing) to do . . . thanks XD

on Jun. 6 2011 at 8:31 pm
myLovelyFather GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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And that's the thing about the future. It's unknown, unknowable, but before you know it, you're there.

whoa, dude . . . that's a piece of writing right there! i mean, so deep. now, imaging what a better place this world would be if we had more of you . . . . wow. ;) 

on Oct. 4 2010 at 7:51 am
washburnlove BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today." - james dean

thank you. that means alot

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on Sep. 24 2010 at 10:23 am
JazzyMyne GOLD, Santa Clara, California
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"I don't know what the future holds; But I do know what holds the future."-my little brother john michael

wow, i cant even find the right words to describe how much i liked this... O.O