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September 26, 2010
By WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
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WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

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&ldquo;Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw.&quot;<br /> &quot;Words and hea

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Shines on my screen
My heart skips a beat
Could it possibly be?
Don’t get my hopes up,
Let’s just wait and see.
With a smile on my face
I begin my reply, upper case
Of course. Beaming with
Glee. Feeling a bit gutsy
I press, Send.
Maybe he’ll say it’s best to
Stay just good friends.
Maybe this would be the end.
All this, from just a new message

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HaleyBree BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 4:39 pm
HaleyBree BRONZE, Seneca, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth is, everyone is going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones worth suffering for.&quot; <br /> -Bob Marley&hearts;

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HAVE YOU EVER EVEN LIKED SOMEONE???, WHEN YOU LIKE SOMEONE ALOT,YOU ASK THEM OUT. THATS WHAT THE GIRL DID IN THE POEM!, AND HE SAID JUST BE FRIENDS. OMGAHH SOME PEOPLE ARE JUST SOO UGH
WriterWithWings DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 3:10 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
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&ldquo;Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw.&quot;<br /> &quot;Words and hea

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Okay, so whenever you fall in love and the same person falls for you (ha, as if that'll happen...) Just remember, it is not intelligent to take the chance with them. Not intelligent at all!
SMWells PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 3:01 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Some truths best left unspoken.

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And just because she liked him, you think that means they should be more than frinds? It's hardly nesisary or inteligent.
HaleyBree BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 1:45 pm
HaleyBree BRONZE, Seneca, South Carolina
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&quot;The truth is, everyone is going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones worth suffering for.&quot; <br /> -Bob Marley&hearts;

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Maybe because in the poem the girl liked him!, duh! and she was takin a chance~!
SMWells PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 9:53 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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I don't see why [you] wouldn't think it best to stay, just good frinds.