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and I thought you were different.
October 13, 2010
you say im diffrent
i said your lying
you said i love you
and now im cryng. .
you hug me
and i pull away
you feel unloved
i reasure u its okay .
you say its over
i say its not.
you walk away
my heart beat stops.
you seem so happy
and im so broken
you laugh and smile
while my wounds are open .
and youve moved on
and i think "please"
but you got so many girls
10x better than me
you said i was diffrent.
i knew you were lying.
no more i love yous
and im still crying..
© Greg K., New Lenox, IL
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Dragonscribe BRONZE said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 6:38 pm
I LOVE this! The rhyming, simple as it was, really made the poem. Really excellent.
CammyLashay SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 6:11 pm
i don't understand why i feel so sad reading this poem maybe because it brings back so many memories...great work love it at that =')
SamanthaBarwick SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 1:49 pm
I really like this. The words mean so much. I just hate it when people don't use proper punctuation and grammar, I mean come on now, you are posted something online for other people to read and vote on. I would of given you all five stars, but your to ignorant to use capital letters and correct spellings and punctuation correctly.
I_am_the_only_me GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 1:03 am
You will find someone soooo much better, and when you do he will probably be back. Guys suck sometimes I'm almost 15 in like a month an I choose not to date. I see no point, someone always gets hurt I'm just going to wait until it matters when someone gets hurt. Keep writting! Great job!
tHEaWESOMEoNE said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 8:38 pm
This is beatiful, i really liked it.
holly.nicole SILVER said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 6:41 pm
I really loved this is reminds me of someone.....thank you for writing this =D
WhiteShadows said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 6:29 pm
I liked this a lot. It's very sad though...:(
Dashes105 said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 2:16 pm
I love this but my favorite part would have to be "you said i love you and now im crying"
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