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Even Though We're Far Apart

October 11, 2010
By PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS


I see you,I hear you,I feel you in my dream
I see me,you,and doves flying near the stream.
I love you,you love me
Is all we really say
you pull me closer to you
in the grass in which we lay.
We look up,the sun goes down
the clouds drift apart,
I look at you with a smile
"That will never be us,your in my heart."
"The sun goes down, the moon comes up
The stars twinkle ever so bright
We lay and connect the dots
come to find out it forms a line of light.
And at the end of each light
was you and me
then that's when we now know
we were ment to be.
As i write, as i listen
and as we both shall see
the world we call Earth
is made for only you and me.



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on Nov. 7 2010 at 9:13 am
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

thanks  everybodys favorite

on Nov. 6 2010 at 11:04 pm
PoetryButterfly123, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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"When your time comes to face one of life's obstacles, stay positive about it and prepare yourself for the big jump over it, because being negative about it is just gonna make it a hell of a lot harder to get one leg over it." - Me

I have read all of your poems i really like them.... i write alot too but i only have three posted on this website....i mostly write out of my emotions......i think this poem is my favorite one of yours......keep writing u have so much talent....

on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:29 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

okay sure :)

on Nov. 6 2010 at 8:08 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

no problem! u should check out my work! i would appreciate it!

on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:15 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

this wa the first of all my poems. this is the one that my friend told me to post and start a poetry book seems like good advice

on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:07 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

ok my absolute favorite peom of yours!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD i luv luv luv this! :) its soo cute but it has a great rythm and i love the ending!

on Oct. 21 2010 at 4:26 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

please comment i want to know what you guys think