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October 18, 2010
By kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

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A sigh paints his picture in my mind
A portrait of beauty
One of a kind
It’s the thing that you see and
gasp.
In delight of pure misery
Yet my love will last.
But then like a wave crashing
Cold against the shore
Knocking down sandcastles unwelcomed
At their door,
The love is gone
You have taken it away.
With you has come change
Unwelcomed by pain

© Michelle K., Vancouver, WA

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I sigh alot...and well I wrote this poem about it(: please comment
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Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 9:13 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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I really enjoy this poem :) 

This is the way I feel about someone right now, it captures it perfectly.

This poem doesn't feel like it's about a sigh, it seems like it's about something far more deeper than a sigh. 

kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 12:43 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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just about one person actually :P and thanks I am glad you like it

 

 

 

XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 11:59 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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&quot;I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!&quot; ~Anon<br /> &quot;You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone.&quot; ~Percy Cerutti<br /> &quot;The hug is incomplete without you :3&quot; NinjaMan

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hmmm, very interesting. i was a little confused, did you love personA and then meet personB who made you forget personA but then person B ended up hurting you? or was personA the one who hurt you?

 

other than that, I really like it :) especially the lines about the wave crashing on the beach knocking down the sandcastles

kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 5:52 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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thanks you!!!!!! (:
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 10:33 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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This is rather interesting, it has some really good lines, I especially like "In delight of pure misery".

You're good :)

Thank you for posting.

kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 9:59 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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Thanks a ton!!! :) i am glad you loved it(:
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 4:46 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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"One day, your life will flash before your eyes; make sure it's worth watching."

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LOVE LOVE IT!

SO  LOVE LOVE LOVE Love l