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Starts With A Smile

October 20, 2010
By WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw.&quot;<br /> &quot;Words and hea


I smile,

Only because I don’t want your sympathy
I cry,

Who wouldn’t after all I’ve been through
I lie,

But that sounds bad, so I ‘pretend’
I hide,

The scars on my wrists and the tears in my eyes
I die,

Because I just can’t wait for the end.


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on Dec. 10 2010 at 5:56 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw.&quot;<br /> &quot;Words and hea

Thank you, I try to only write when I feel I have enough of a connection to move something in my readers also. Thanks again!

on Dec. 9 2010 at 10:54 pm
i_sold_my_soul_to_books, ., Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
This isn&#039;t mine but it&#039;s honestly the best &ldquo;I have hated words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&rdquo; -Markus Zusak

I love the way this one flows, its natural and really well done, it makes me kind of depressed. Which is a good thing, the writing is evoking deep emotions

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on Nov. 4 2010 at 12:12 pm
Cait222 BRONZE, Muskegon, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you can&#039;t say anything nice....don&#039;t say it at all&quot;

This was really strong and emotional enough to where anyone can relate.  You are really good, keep submitting your work :)