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October 21, 2010
By gabster101 SILVER, Sherwood, Oregon
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Love like you mean it!

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She is the wind beneath my wings
The peanut butter to my jelly
The pencil to my paper
The toothbrush to my paste
I only equal one half
But both of us equal one whole
I am the laces to her shoes
The water to her bottle
And the pedal to her flower
I AM HER OTHER HALF!

© Yoko K., Madison, WI

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gabster101 said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 1:08 pm
I KNOW! It should be that way! :)
XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 11:50 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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&quot;I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!&quot; ~Anon<br /> &quot;You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone.&quot; ~Percy Cerutti<br /> &quot;The hug is incomplete without you :3&quot; NinjaMan

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No problem :) Don't you hate that? There should be an edit button for things like that ;)
gabster101 said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 11:25 am
Thanks so much! I realized my spelling error after I posted! :)
XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 10:33 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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&quot;I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!&quot; ~Anon<br /> &quot;You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone.&quot; ~Percy Cerutti<br /> &quot;The hug is incomplete without you :3&quot; NinjaMan

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I love this! It's a simple, creative way to get a message across that is often overy dramatic and sappy.

One critique: When talking about flower petals, the word is petal instead of pedal. Pedal is like a bike pedal.