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One last look at my girl

November 4, 2010
By Tori Bond BRONZE, Brigton, Maine
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She said her life was hard. But you though she was kidding. Now look she is dead and in the ground. If you had only been there for her and listened. You could have kept on looking at her. But now she's dead and gone.

© Alyssa B., Forest Hills, NY

The author's comments:
I am writing this piece about this girl I know and she has a hard life but people think that she is just kidding about it. But she does not die. It have's to do with love, school, her health, Family, drugs, Friends, and dead because that is all the stuff that makes her life hard.
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