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The Storm Which Controls Me

December 8, 2010
By ToRemember SILVER, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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ToRemember SILVER, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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dont ever tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.

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I can only see the silhouette of my dream up in the sky
I need the courage and the strength to reach it if I try.
But thunder pounds and knocks me down as it also makes me deaf.
And lightning flashes forcing me blind and blocking my whole path.
Huge fierce breezes push me back as waves flood all the shores
The sun shines down and burns me out while collapsing all the floors.
An earthquake rumbles and good things tumble and im left here all alone
I sit and hope, and dream and wait for a place I can call
Home.

The author's comments:
I randomly wrote this once when i was in a kinda depressed mood, and it just so happened i had to do a project for school with poems associated with weather. kind of a mini rhyme paragraph i guess. (: <3
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