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teenage life

January 3, 2011
By Inspirus GOLD, Mombasa, Other
Inspirus GOLD, Mombasa, Other
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is it me or the days aren't moving
and the motion of life seems engulfing
and days that pass are so familiar
yet one is 'Monday' the other 'Friday'
is it me or this school is dull
and what is taught seems more confusing
with such hard problems in math
only to find their solutions in chem
is it me or my face is a little ...
and my old trousers don't fit
am I too thin, I think am a little fat
will that pretty girl like me?
Is it me or no one understands me
dad says I'm rude I can't be good
mom complains of my somber mood
yet I say I'm too old to be ruled.



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on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:28 am
AlkaPradhan SILVER, Lucknow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone become your everything because when that's lost you have nothing.....

Its really very good and i too can relate it with me

 


on Nov. 29 2011 at 2:11 pm
iamonecoolradiator, London, Other
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This is really haunting in a odd kind of way...it's really accurate and I can relate to it but at the same time it's a little abstract.  If you ever have a minute could you take a look at my work..you don't have to it's just I'd be grateful for some more feedback! 

Inspirus GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 1:45 pm
Inspirus GOLD, Mombasa, Other
14 articles 0 photos 8 comments
Thank you. I hoped teenagers would relate to it. I'm glad you do. Once again,thank you.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:25 am
kaylatheninjaturtle, Lebanon, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don&#039;t matter, and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss

I love this. I can relate to it so much. Good work.