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Adoring Drizzle

May 2, 2011
By Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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I have always loved the rain
ever since i was little, when it would rain
i jump on puddles
i would purposely
get caught in the rain
and I would stay outside
until I was soaked
raindrops were my lullaby
watching the rain in your car
talking to you
i want to freeze that moment
Forever

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

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Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 11:06 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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Well (hastily placing  my bowler hat on the top of my head and sweeping up both duck and metaphor in my arms), I suppose I had better get going then.
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 9:05 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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Boosflash, Boosflash, Boosflash

Whatever are we going to do with you...

:) :) :)

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 12:24 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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:)

Thank you. Your comments are greatly appreciated. 

savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 11:33 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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I love poems that you just write on the spot, they're usually the best ones.  I like the last line, "I want to freeze that moment / Forever"
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:18 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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well then, get out of my parking lot. and take your stupid metaphor. you and your duck.

-i love you...hehehe.

Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 5:26 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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No, no; it was only a metaphor. ;)
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 5:10 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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Wait, you guys know each other in real life? 

You did that?! That's kind-of funny! He he he! :)

It's OK. I did totally weird things like that too! :)

Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 4:00 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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Um, er, excuse me, Boosflash. But I'm that idiot doing jumping jacks in the parking lot. But I'll stop if it's bothering you.
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 3:30 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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uh, Ok. Thank you! :0
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:48 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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i do love how this poem perfectly flew out of you, and ended well-ly. unlike some idiot doing jumping jacks in the parkin lots who doesnt know when to stop.
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 8:31 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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You are so very welcome! :)
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 6:18 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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I like the brevity of each line; it adds a lot to the whole idea of the simplicity of adoration for the rain. I LOVE the poem itself because it reminds me of when I was little, and it gives me a lot of joy to be reminded of those moments. Thanks for writing this!
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 11:10 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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It wasn't on purpose. This poem just flew out of me. :)
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 11:19 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Your lines seem cut short, that's really interesting, it's like an abrupt and excited breath of air.