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I Tried

June 7, 2011
By Zaylie PLATINUM, Everett, Washington
Zaylie PLATINUM, Everett, Washington
24 articles 13 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s not the kind, the kind you take about it&#039;s just the kind that rips the clothing off your mind.&quot; -Flyleaf <br /> &quot;You feet in the air, Your head on the ground Try this trick and spin it yeah Your head will colapse when there&#039;s nothing it in.&quot;-Pixies


I tried but you just got high,
I care about you,
Never meant to make you pissed
I was just upset,
Whipping away the tears,
You've made fall.
The snapping isn't working,
My green eyes fading,
With pain
I tried,
But you forgot,
Only because you got high
I don't care,
You're running now,
Not talking to me.
But I tried,
And I'm giving up,
But just wanted to let you know I tried.



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on May. 4 2013 at 6:14 pm
Zaylie PLATINUM, Everett, Washington
24 articles 13 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s not the kind, the kind you take about it&#039;s just the kind that rips the clothing off your mind.&quot; -Flyleaf <br /> &quot;You feet in the air, Your head on the ground Try this trick and spin it yeah Your head will colapse when there&#039;s nothing it in.&quot;-Pixies

Thank you. I hope you keep reading my stuff.

on May. 4 2013 at 5:05 pm
angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
24 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;The boy never cried again, and he never forgot what he&#039;d learned: that to love is to destroy, and that to be loved is to be the one destroyed.&rdquo; -Jace Wayland City of Bones

this is a very nice piece of work, u have real potential