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Craving For Your Touch

June 7, 2011
By Zaylie PLATINUM, Everett, Washington
Zaylie PLATINUM, Everett, Washington
24 articles 13 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s not the kind, the kind you take about it&#039;s just the kind that rips the clothing off your mind.&quot; -Flyleaf <br /> &quot;You feet in the air, Your head on the ground Try this trick and spin it yeah Your head will colapse when there&#039;s nothing it in.&quot;-Pixies


I remember your touch

The way your arm felt around me

The way your heat kept me warm that long August night.

I remember your smile,

I remember how that one day you touched my hair,

The way it felt

So warm, so gaintal.

I remember the tears you shed

When it was to hard

For you to stand

The length for us was just to much

To bare

It was for me to

That's why I called it off

Not because of someone else
But the pain was to great



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OldYoungOne said...
on May. 8 2013 at 7:44 pm
Its cool :) I do it all the time

on May. 4 2013 at 6:17 pm
Zaylie PLATINUM, Everett, Washington
24 articles 13 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s not the kind, the kind you take about it&#039;s just the kind that rips the clothing off your mind.&quot; -Flyleaf <br /> &quot;You feet in the air, Your head on the ground Try this trick and spin it yeah Your head will colapse when there&#039;s nothing it in.&quot;-Pixies

Yes, will do that for you. Sorry it's so late of a reply but haven't really checked any of my work and stuff.

OldYoungOne said...
on Nov. 15 2012 at 3:33 pm
I like the way you ended the poem by giving the reader (me) an unexpected reaction. I could probably use some tips from you about my work I would really appreciate it (could you rate it to?)