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Suicide: The Emptiness

June 8, 2011
By spoiledkid12 GOLD, Cape Coral, Florida
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giving up, letting go
of chaos
your head stops buzzing
with frenzied words
but the only greeter
the one to keep
your company
is silence
is nothing
you won't feel peace
you won't feel anything
put down that dagger
that gun
those pills
you will not be an empty void
not today

© Julie P., Rochdale, MA

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no.name. PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:39 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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I like this one a lot too. I feel a connection with this poem. I think that's because I have felt this way before.
kaykaybeck PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:31 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
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I really liked it! (: check out some of my stuff?