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What Did I do Wrong?

June 14, 2011
By Deszy6028 PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
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You write such pretty word, but lifes no story book. Loves and excuse to get hurt, and to hurt. Do you like to hurt, I do. I DO! Then hurt me.

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The ones I love I hurt the most. The ones I care about always leave me. The ones I look up to always make horrible choices. I'm supposed to follow in someones foot steps but I'm making my own path. It all starts with JUST....ONE.....STEP. My legs might be broken and my heart may be shattered but everything heals, it just takes time. Time, time is something I don't have enough of. None to spend, none to save, and none to give away. My life means nothing to anyone. Why did you leave me, after all this time we spent together? What did I do wrong?

© Shaylene F., Rowlett, TX

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