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The Pain You Had Caused

May 31, 2011
By ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
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A bullet of pain.
A bullet through the heart.
A bullet without a bullet.
Pain striking through.

The world shattered to pieces.
The world crashing down.
The world to its end.
All because of you.

Why did you lie?
Why did you cheat?
Why did you not be honest?
Is that hard to ask?

You had deprived me of life.
You had eradicated my soul.
You had showed me no love.
Love is too valuable to lose.

Maybe it's time to make a change.
Maybe it's time to do somethinng big.
Maybe it's time to end myself.
And end the pain you had caused.

© Miranda B., Neosho, NY

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NaomiPikalek GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2013 at 11:04 am
NaomiPikalek GOLD, Millwaukee, Wisconsin
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you speak right from the heart, and I can feel every word that you write.
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 4:47 am
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I love, love, love he fourth stanza. Keep up the good work...
leafy said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 6:58 pm
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nice poem! i can connect to it...keep up the good work!
TimeForCoffee BRONZE said...
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I love this poem, Osvaldo! :D