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June 20, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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All I see is the
image
of you and me
holding hands
holding me
till I saw
you and her
holding hands
holding her

© Heather H., Phoenix, AZ

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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:21 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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the heart break one isn't but this ine and vines isn't about a relatonship i've never been in one but it's true about the other poems
Ha-5-rika SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 10:54 am
Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
9 articles 7 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what your thoughts make it.<br /> Happiness, success and the greatest of achievements are nothing if you don&#039;t have someone to share it with. <br /> A life lived for others is a life worthwhile - Albert Einstein.

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Are your heartbreak poems based on past relationships? 'Cause they are amazing?
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:07 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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haha ok i'll check
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:04 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks clever screen ane miss you
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:02 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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&quot;It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends.&quot;<br /> -Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter<br /> &quot;What doesn&#039;t kill you, makes you stronger.&quot;<br /> -Unknown

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oommmgggg once again I see how this involves youu-knoww-whooo lol fantastic! :)
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 11:39 am
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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&quot;laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone.&quot; anonymous

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and on that note, your lucky numbers ar 1,5,7,3,54, and 9. live, laugh, don't bet money, and check out some of my work if you ever get the chance. ;)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:39 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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ya u r like a fortune cookie thanks
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:32 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone.&quot; anonymous

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the image of two people holding hands always makes makes me think of a trap closing down...love can become a beautiful cage.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:06 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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actually i've never had a boyfriend this and my other love poems are based off a looong story
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:02 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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Aw, this is sad.  It's like your other poem, 'Vines'.  I'm guessing you recently suffered a break-up?  If so, my heart goes out to you.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 7:16 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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awww thanks everyone I;m sorry about punctuation but I don't worry about it in my poetry. In all other aspects of writing I do.
ArgonElement SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 11:05 am
ArgonElement SILVER, The Woodlands, Texas
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Question Authority.

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Short and unbelievably sweet.
FrownMonaLisa SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 10:05 am
FrownMonaLisa SILVER, Arlington, Texas
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Don&#039;t cry because it&#039;s over. Smile because it happened

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Really cute. Sad but sweet at the same time. I love it. But try not to let your words be so choppy and use some punctuation where there should be pauses. Other than that AMAZING
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 4:28 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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&lrm;&quot;I&rsquo;m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don&rsquo;t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world.&quot; - Beyonc&eacute;

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few words but "aw!"