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summertime MAG

July 15, 2011
By HazelNutBee PLATINUM, Beaver Dam, Wisconsin
HazelNutBee PLATINUM, Beaver Dam, Wisconsin
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vest, suspenders, harmonica.
wallpaper, chipped paint, wooden floor.
twiggy haircut, new glasses, bleach blond.
coffee creamer, noodles, raw gums.
sharpie letters, bare arms, 2 a.m. dances.
lace, fringe, tap shoes.
mosquito bites, nail polish, bent ring.
small print, chicken scratch, long words.
showtunes, slippery floor, locked doors.
photographs, magazines, videos.
wasted hours, late nights, blue skies.
fabric, needles, fresh look.
old pictures, dried flowers, tissue paper.
boxes, waking up, smeared makeup.
sun, peeling shoulders, clover.
sidewalk, streetlamp, gravel.
fans, flip flops, closed doors.
color, shape, texture.
stretches, mouth shapes, hairpins.
candles, firewood, flannel shirt.
new music, old music, pressure.
thinking, feeling, following up.
postcards, cobblestones, good-byes.



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on Sep. 3 2011 at 2:51 am
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
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certainly much more than a collection of words separated by commas - I felt like I was taken back to your summertime, every detail was there. Really well done!!

could you maybe have a look at my poems? especially 'Dream Poem' ?