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Soup Sincerely

August 14, 2011
By TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
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TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
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&quot;The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk&quot; -H.W. Hegel<br /> <br /> &quot;Words are our most inexhaustable source of magic&#039; -Albus Dumbledore

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Soup
smells of rainy days
steamy tendrils
fogging up
gray sky and
trills on the window
shoes, squeaky
with dripping grass and
mornings, misty
from december
drizzle through
the night
foggy clouds, up
by the top
of the chimney
spider webs beaded,
dipped in silver and hung
up in the moonlight
to dry
sipping tea
faces flickering
in light
of dying embers
turning
musty pages
to the lull of a
rainy day

© Abby S., New Carlisle, OH

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billgamesh11 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 10:56 am
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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&quot;It&#039;s always darkest before the dawn.&quot; ~Florence and the Machine

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This is the first poem I have ever read about soup, and I have to say, it was pretty good!!! Keep up the great work!!!:):):);)
Kev-Girl SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:17 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :) <br /> <br /> Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing. <br /> <br /> If you cant annoy someone, there&#039;s no point in writing.<br /> <br /> Love is overrated, marry for money.

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yo, cool poem! hmmm... i can totally relate to this! thanks for posting! and please check out my first post!