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September 14, 2011
By ArtFanatic1695 SILVER, Wheeler, Texas
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&quot;Can&#039;t is negative so think positive&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Tammye

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A 16-year-old girl walks alone in the school halls, sits alone at lunch.
No one sees her no one listens to her, even her own parents.
She wears black all the time.
She loves to draw and loves math, though no one notices.
At home she locks her self in her room
to block out the yelling and screaming.
Her parents stop yelling at each other only to yell at her

© Krystal B., Bloomingdale, IL

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Shahiro PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 3:28 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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&quot;Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy.&quot; - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

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I agree with smiley face! It's is a good poem, a good topic but it needs some editing, revising. Ps. Please check out my work? I love getting comments and feedback. ;D
ArtFanatic1695 SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 9:46 am
ArtFanatic1695 SILVER, Wheeler, Texas
7 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t is negative so think positive&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Tammye

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improve* ( lol i can't spell) :P
ArtFanatic1695 SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 9:42 am
ArtFanatic1695 SILVER, Wheeler, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t is negative so think positive&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Tammye

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Thanks, I apperticat it when some one does not put my work down but helps me inprove it.
smileyface96 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2011 at 7:31 pm
smileyface96 BRONZE, Tifton, Georgia
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Well, Re-wording could be necessary and maybe sprinkle with a few more adjectives to spice it up with some description. Maybe add how the girl feels or how people perceive her behavior? Just some ideas :) Stop by and looks at my poetry sometime? Id love some feed back! Have a good day!