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Lark's Song
I hear the whisper,
wind blowing soflty,
in my ear.
It grows louder, wider.
Like a light tearing a hole
larger,
in my heart.
I hear the Lark,
the song it sings,
fills my soul.
Bursting it open
To a whole new world,
of grief, of pain.
I could not stay secluded,
My own world wouldn't stay,
in its,
own little corner of the Universe.
A black hole
had to come.
I had to hear
the Lark's Song.
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This article has 3 comments.
Love it! Very thought-provoking, very well done. I just have one little bit of critisicm: The line "My own world wouldn't stay,
in it's"
Seems kind of choppy. I think it would flow better if you evened out the lines to about the same lenght, or combined them into one. But otherwise, very good!
4/5
Does the Lark's song represent something big, like a catastrophic event that changes the narrator's life? It really makes me wonder about that.
I thought it was a really great poem! You used some similes and other good writing techniques that really made it good!
Keep it up! :)
