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Staring at those beautiful stars

November 1, 2011
By Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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What you believe is what you become!!

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Staring at those beautiful stars closer to the heaven,
I dream of you with my eyes open.

The moon like a ball of snow,
appears so dull when compared to 'your glow'.

With every lonely moment becoming darker and colder,
I wish you were here with your head on my shoulder.

As dawn sets in and as stars become few,
I swear darling that i will always love you...

© Ashley W., Rockford, MI

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Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 12:48 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Thanks a lot :)
InvisibleHeart GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 12:26 pm
InvisibleHeart GOLD, Barony, Other
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cute!! I really like this
Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 11:33 am
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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What you believe is what you become!!

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Thank You :) Sure
Fizza SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 8:23 am
Fizza SILVER, Raipur, Other
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really sweet n beautiful poem. 5/5 stars! :) wud u mind to check out some of my work?
Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 1:25 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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thank you..i do love that line as well :)
Plain-Jane ELITE said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 1:23 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

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so sweet! i love the second line "i dream of you with eyes open".
Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 12:55 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Thanks a ton (:
BellaChance PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 12:53 pm
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really good!! (: super cute
Naman BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 12:47 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Thank You :) They say u can never understand a girl..that certainly applies for men as well!!
IdentityMangler PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 12:44 pm
IdentityMangler PLATINUM, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Made me cry. Guys can be so romantic :')
Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 8:06 am
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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thank u :)
Tbug1997 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 8:05 am
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Very pretty i like it
Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:51 am
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thank u :)
SiaHilion BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:50 am
SiaHilion BRONZE, Jaipur, Other
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last line is breath taking yaaaar....
Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:27 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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thank you :)
Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:26 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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thank you
ya definitely :)
OneDirectionInfection said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 2:15 pm
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WOW...!!!!!!!!!!!
collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 1:56 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
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awwwwwwwww!!! :)

 

...please check out, rate, and comment on my work too. THanks! I appreciate it! :)

Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 1:30 am
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Thank you :)
Arpit said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 1:27 am
Seriously amazing dear..!! Keep it up man..!!