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The Human Mind
November 25, 2011
You’re running like crazy
Will you ever stop?
You’re making me sick.
Please slow down for once.
I can’t comprehend the things that you
Speak to me.
There aren't words in existence to describe
What you’re doing to me.
I try to breathe
But there isn’t room for that either.
I try to sleep
Yet I can’t do that neither.
You control me completely.
I hate you for doing so.
When you’re done taking over me
Let me know that I’m in control.
© Candace L., Amityville, NY
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This article has 4 comments.
OneProzacADay PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 9:47 am
This is so simple but says so much. it takes skill to do that. keep writing!!
poetic.eyes PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 9:31 pm
This was more up beat when I read it. Not necessarily the meaning or the story but the rhythm and the flow of words. Towards the end of the poem, last stanza, the rhythm changes . To me, it sounded a bit wobbly, it didn't smooth back out since it was the end of the poem. But it was still great, and I bet people could go on and on about how random and non rhythmical my poetry is, so I thought you should know! What I especially like about the way you write is that your wording is simple, and everyone can read and understand what you are saying. I like writing like that too.
TouchOfARose SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 5:48 pm
So when you're a famous poet just remember your weird little ginger bestie, k? :P ^Proud that I know you!
I love this!
I love this!
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