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I Think, Well I Know
November 26, 2011
Yes I gotta say that I've been Physically
And mentally
hurt and neglected
Sometimes I feel like a car that has been purposely reacted
And I feel bad when I think about suicide
And how I still look you in the eyes
And act like everything is OK
But its not
I'm suicidal
And all the way
You
I
We look at each other like everything is OK
But its not
I'm not going to do it thou
I want to go to heaven
That's the only reason
Don't want to rot in hell
Nor wanna be a burden here on Earth
.....
© Danielle K., Saint Augustine, FL
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This article has 17 comments.
Prometheus PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 5:32 pm
oh you meant WRECKED! :0
Prometheus PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:20 pm
Confusing at times. e.g. "Sometimes I feel like a car that has been purposely reacted." But with some editing it would be quite strong!
Truetothering_24 GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 5:20 pm
so simple but so much meaning loveddddd it
Alison4355 said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:02 pm
Hello my name is Alison and I love this poem it is so.... whats the word Unique and very honest. If this is a true story then IM SORRY But this is a cool poem to me.
Resonating_Words SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:46 pm
This has room for improvement -- for example saying "wanna" is too conversational in comparison to the rest of the poem.
In general, I do like it, and I'm curious if this is truthful or imagined.
Come-n-Gone GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:45 pm
If this is a real situation for you, i'm so sorry. But either way it's an amazing poem.
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