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November 19, 2011
By Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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The emotions spilling out,
They've been discovered.
Tears filling up my eyes,
and overwhelming my soul,
for there is a sad story to be told.
Those days I just need to face,
and realize my fate,
That I shall never be with him.
If only someone would know what i think,
And if only they knew how much sadness it brings,
Or how much my heart aches everyday.
They'd pity me and say "Poor girl, she'll never get her way".
And I'll sit and I'll cry,
Hiding my feelings inside,
Just what i do, every time.

© Jasmine R., Bourbon, MI

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Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:38 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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thanks.. no problem:)
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:37 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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very emotional, i like that, wanna check mine out too?
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:40 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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thanks... means a lot!
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:40 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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thanks so much :)
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:57 pm
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
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&quot;A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment &lt;/3&quot;<br /> &quot;When the going gets tough, knock someone out&quot; ;D &lt;3<br /> &quot;It&#039;s easy to fail, hard to succeed&quot;

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I know the feeling. Itt's never good
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:55 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Can't put it better than Wonderment did.  Nice job...
Wonderment DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:35 pm
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I like this. The emoutional undertones are strong and its very relatable.
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:28 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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yes, that is correct:) i will definitly check it out!
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:27 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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aww thanks you soo much! :')
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:27 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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thanks so much :)
Risible SILVER said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 8:17 pm
Risible SILVER, Norwalk, Connecticut
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great expression of emotion! I can totally relate to what you're describing. It seems like in this case you're talking about a guy you will never be able to be with, correct? But the emotion can be applied to all sorts of situations, which makes it very relatable. Would you check out my poem Here, I Can Barely Think? I'd love to get your feedback. 
Becca17 GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 8:15 pm
Becca17 GOLD, Belleville Ontario, Other
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beautifully written. brings tears because i can relate.
kwoodman821 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:32 pm
kwoodman821 BRONZE, Old Fort, North Carolina
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this is amazing! i can relate to it, and i like that about writing! Its so heart-wrenching. Great job!