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Haiku Kinda :)

November 27, 2011
By Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"


Look into the sky
Think about how high
You can go
Then look down low
Your standing on the ground
Not nothing round
Or something that makes a lot of sound
Just the hard rock solid ground
The trees everywhere
And the wind in the air
Breezing through your hair
If were at the beach
Sand through your toes
Wave Swift on and on
Sun beaming down on you
Don't you want some of that to ?!
I know you do
Just gone head tell the truth!..



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Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 5:04 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

lolx im just telling it like it is!

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:11 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

hahahaha thanks i was just fooling around.

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:06 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

AWESOME ILLUSIONS!

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:47 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

thank you very much

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:45 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

lolx thats why i said kinda lolx

on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:39 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

i hae no idea how this is a haiku but it IS very good :)

on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:38 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

XD omg Zahria!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:22 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

thanks for the tip... will keep in mind!

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:19 pm
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments

it is quite nice and i think you wrote well ... just an advice , next time try to do away with the grammatical mistakes like the last line ... keep up the good work !!!! :)

 


Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 5:14 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

i dont really care !!! SORRY ... IDK U

on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:24 pm
romancer2 BRONZE, Atkinson, Nebraska
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Amazing things come from ordinary people!

I didn't really like it...

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:12 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

lol i was just fooling around... thank you !!

on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:10 pm
Tori_Lie-write SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
8 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself, no one will care if you fly off the top of the roof and make it to the unicorns.

nice :) u did great!