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Haiku Kinda :)

November 27, 2011
By Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

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Look into the sky
Think about how high
You can go
Then look down low
Your standing on the ground
Not nothing round
Or something that makes a lot of sound
Just the hard rock solid ground
The trees everywhere
And the wind in the air
Breezing through your hair
If were at the beach
Sand through your toes
Wave Swift on and on
Sun beaming down on you
Don't you want some of that to ?!
I know you do
Just gone head tell the truth!..

© Allison S., Eau Claire, WI

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Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 5:04 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

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lolx im just telling it like it is!
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:11 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

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hahahaha thanks i was just fooling around.
pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:06 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Jeremiah 29:11

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AWESOME ILLUSIONS!
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:47 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

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thank you very much
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:45 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

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lolx thats why i said kinda lolx
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:39 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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i hae no idea how this is a haiku but it IS very good :)
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:38 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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XD omg Zahria!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:22 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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thanks for the tip... will keep in mind!
Manish9 SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:19 pm
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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it is quite nice and i think you wrote well ... just an advice , next time try to do away with the grammatical mistakes like the last line ... keep up the good work !!!! :)

 

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 5:14 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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i dont really care !!! SORRY ... IDK U
romancer2 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:24 pm
romancer2 BRONZE, Atkinson, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
Amazing things come from ordinary people!

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I didn't really like it...
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:12 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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lol i was just fooling around... thank you !!
Tori_Lie-write SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:10 pm
Tori_Lie-write SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself, no one will care if you fly off the top of the roof and make it to the unicorns.

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nice :) u did great!