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Why do fools fall in love ?

November 27, 2011
By Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

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When did my feelings for you get so deep
When and why did they take a long leap.
What if he acts like nothing ever happened like our friendship never was?
What if he looks right through me and ignores me just because?
Don't deny feelings
The feelings you've had for so along
I mean its not wrong
To love again after you've been hurt over and over
And I'm sorry for that
But its a fact
that I may love you <3
Yes you
How could I act
When you just turned your back on me!
How can I act what can I do to get you to see?
What words can be said
what else can I say?!
What words can I tell you
to make you stay?
My love for you is true
I wouldn't lie to you...
I look in your eyes
And what do I see
I see nothing but secrets
Hidden from me
Your voice makes me have butterflies
And I know when you talk you don't tell me lies :)
My heart skips a beat when you text me
Your the only one with a key...
to my heart
to my soul
You make me whole
Your smile makes me weak
Your tears make mines leak
I know what you seek
You seek passion
You seek Love
And the only way that you'll know if your quest is over;
Is if you look me in my eyes and stop trying to cover
The love you have for me
Just stop
Open your Eyes
And look in front of you.

© Matt F., Pierz, MN

The author's comments:
What inspired me to do this Poem was... Its this boy and we've been friends for a long time and something happened one night and tells me that people that are friends usually end up loving each other then we just stop talking for a while
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Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 5:12 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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thank you!!
Deathbyflower said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 12:09 pm
Deathbyflower, Richmond VA, Virginia
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&quot;All around me&quot;.

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Not really into poems but yours is good.
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 3:57 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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you got it youngspeare and thank you so much for your comment!!
youngspeare BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 6:27 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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We wouldn&#039;t ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we&#039;d all celebrate its tenacity, we&#039;d all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don&#039;t ask me why thank God and ask me how

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Zahriaaaa! Incredible job, i'm so liking this poem. The imagery is sharp and the emotion you've put into it is even better. Keep posting :) 
Please check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/comment? i'd REALLY appreciate it!
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:33 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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hahaha.. thanks alot!
Manish9 SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:25 pm
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Right from the Heart and on the Money .... splendid work !!!! relates completely to me !!!

 

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:13 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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Thank you very much... And for the tip, ill keep it in mind.
byebye said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 8:22 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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Great work, Zahria! A few grammatical/spelling errors here and there, but the writing is solid and I really enjoyed reading this! :)
byebye said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 8:22 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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Great work, Zahria! A few grammatical/spelling errors here and there, but the writing is solid and I really enjoyed reading this! :)
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 5:15 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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Thank you so much!! :)
Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:36 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
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&quot;Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I&#039;m in.&quot;-Smith

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Amazing! I love your imagery and description. Very good job!

Please take a look at some of my work if you have a spare minute. I'd love to hear your opinion. :)