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"She's Mine"
December 3, 2011
I see you almost every work day,
But you don’t see you.
I know the beauty that lies
Within you, dormant.
I want you to see you.
You’re smart,
Intelligent,
And worth every word in the dictionary.
I want to be the guy that says,
“She’s beautiful,
And mine,
And she knows it.”
© Jamie Y., Alto, MI
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Sophie Rose Cope SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 9:59 am
I like this one because it is unusual in writing (the subject matter - at least i think so) but ordinary in the world.
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 9:54 am
I like this one because it is unusual in writing (at least for me it is) but ordinary in the world. one thing I thought could MAYBE have a tweak - "You're smart, Intelligent," is maybe saying the same thing twice, right? how about "I want you to see you." and then "Clever you, The you worth every word in the dictionary" okay, I'm sorry. I said WAY too much :(
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