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[i can never forget you]

December 6, 2011
By PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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The words, they are too heavy
To wield gracefully.
I am trying to be so careful
About you,
But I am falling stones.

Please, don't
Forget about me when
Your feet are steady, but your hands
Are trembling.
Don't forget about me
When your eyes are closed but you can't
Sleep alone.
Remember me
When-
Ever, really.
It couldn't hurt if you never forgot me.

© Stephanie F., Marblehead, MA

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Heavy hammers meant for the delicate marble.
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PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2012 at 1:31 am
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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Aw, thanks. Its cool to know it really has that effect. 
Ga-GahKayMarie GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2012 at 11:38 pm
Ga-GahKayMarie GOLD, Patterson, California
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When you used the words like heavy and stones I actually felt the heaviness of the first part of the poem then to me it slowly got lighter that was a nice effect :)
PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 3:21 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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Thanks! I'm glad!
PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 3:20 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

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Haha. Cool :)
JustAnotherOwl SILVER said...
on Feb. 13 2012 at 3:42 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
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I really enjoyed this! I thought the word choice was really good...and, I don't know, I just liked it a lot! (:
PhoenixCrossing GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 4:48 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
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I realllly like this piece! The imagery is great! The "remember me when" reminds me of the song Don't Forget to Remember Me by Carrie Underwood !
PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:04 am
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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Thank you! I agree- the picture does match well!
SwallowedByInsanity PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 7:52 am
SwallowedByInsanity PLATINUM, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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The picture you chose for this piece matches so perfectly! Hanging on, when you know it's time to let go.

I also thought "Remember me when- ever really" was very clever (: