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Without You

December 7, 2011
By wildchick BRONZE, Bridgeport, Connecticut
wildchick BRONZE, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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I become happy from the wake of your smile. "i love you" are the words i need to help me through the day. With people who are vile. I always hear your voice when i sleep. Your arms are my home, and your heart is my strength. Even if you die, your love will wipe my tears when i cry. Although Iv'e went through bad and good times, we've gone through them all and you will pick me up if I fall. Without you ,mom, it's hard to survive.


The author's comments:
I wanted to emphasize the fact that we should appreciate our mothers because at some point they will depart from our lives. We should be grateful to have our mothers cook our food, clean our rooms, and give a loving hand when we need one. It is really important to always help out your mothers because they work hard for us every day. I, myself, have been mean to my mother. I wanted to describe the characteristics of a caring mother.

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on Dec. 24 2011 at 4:59 pm
wildchick BRONZE, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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muchas grasias

moyita said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 6:07 pm
Cynthia tu poema esta muy lindo espero que hagas un poema para mi tan bonito como este, felicidades continua asi te quiero mucho

moyita said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 6:02 pm
quisiera ser un genio para aportar algo a la poesia