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A Girl's Weakness'

December 13, 2011
By A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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If zombies attack us..im tripping u<br /> If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.<br /> If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn&#039;t come back it was never yours.<br /> I&#039;m scared to fall and be dropped.

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Kiss a girl
hold her hand
keep her close
ask her to dance
rap her in
your arms so tight
talk to her
all day and night
compliment her
on her worst days
and lover her in
every
way

© Julie S., Marblehead, MA

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A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 17 2012 at 2:22 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u<br /> If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.<br /> If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn&#039;t come back it was never yours.<br /> I&#039;m scared to fall and be dropped.

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I will   :) and I'm not THAT good, so I bet anybody could write just as good, if not better, so all you gotta do is try!
Depressed-Ness SILVER said...
on Apr. 10 2012 at 2:27 pm
Depressed-Ness SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
6 articles 0 photos 39 comments

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You can wish apon a star, but only you can make the dream come true.<br /> <br /> You dont need boys, boys need you.

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keep up the good work. i will try to write good poems like you.
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 2:53 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u<br /> If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.<br /> If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn&#039;t come back it was never yours.<br /> I&#039;m scared to fall and be dropped.

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Thank you!! I really try :)
TheGracefulWriter BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 3:03 pm
TheGracefulWriter BRONZE, Cleghorn, Iowa
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It's SO beautiful!! Good work! :)
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:02 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u<br /> If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.<br /> If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn&#039;t come back it was never yours.<br /> I&#039;m scared to fall and be dropped.

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Oh my gosh IKR!!!!!
Razberry-Monster BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 1:55 pm
Razberry-Monster BRONZE, Wildomar, California
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Awww this one is sooo cute X3
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 1:51 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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You write in a notebook too?! So do I!! It's so annoying when you have to look back and forth from your notebook to your computer. And don't get me started on when you lose your place and you just want to throw your book and your computer out the window lol!! And the headaches too! So annoying DX.
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 1:39 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u<br /> If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.<br /> If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn&#039;t come back it was never yours.<br /> I&#039;m scared to fall and be dropped.

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yeah i typed it too fast, it was PERFECT when i wrote it in my notebook..
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 1:36 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u<br /> If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.<br /> If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn&#039;t come back it was never yours.<br /> I&#039;m scared to fall and be dropped.

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thank you!!!
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 1:36 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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I like this but you had miss spelled two words (Do you type super fast? Because I do the samething too!) "Rap" should have been "Wrap" and "lover" should have been "love". All in all it was a lovely poem :D.
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 1:34 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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&quot;These are the times that try men&#039;s souls.&quot; - Thomas Paine.<br /> <br /> &quot;You don&#039;t understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could&#039;ve been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am.&quot; - On the Water Front<br /> <br /> &quot;This is my place of failure.&quot;

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Well done! I like how you structure it! It reminds me of my style!