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Confusion in Love

January 6, 2012
By RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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My heart beats faster
And eyes grow wide
As you hold me close
Standing side by side
So wrong but so right,
A confusing finesse
My head warns me no
But my heart screams out yes

© Jordan K., Oxford, GA

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About me and a guy I like who likes me too, but because we've... basically dated each other's best friends before, it wouldn't be right to be together. *sad face* =(
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Luna557 SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 11:01 pm
Luna557 SILVER, Wheaton, Illinois
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Clever, on point, and not overdone. I think some poems are meant to be epics (ie The Illiad) and some are to be savored like small candies.
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 12:48 pm
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Sewer sweet but sad
AceOfAngels BRONZE said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 8:27 pm
AceOfAngels BRONZE, Milford, Connecticut
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This is a short and to-the-point poem. I like it simply because it gets the point across without it being overly fruity. I know what it's like to want something but you're not allowed to have it. I hope all the best for you and maybe things will work out. I like the "A confusing finesse" part. It's a small descriptive writing. People overly describe sometimes, but you put it just right, even if it is short and sweet.