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January 3, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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Stolen away,
Beating... Beating...
Taking a breath,
Denial weeps for us.
Against my skin...
Hidden inside,
Are we really nothing?

Softly this heart longs...
For you...
What lies in your eyes?
Oh, my love...
Remember who I am,
So gently falling...
Captured.

Whisper again,
Are all your secrets screaming?
Begging...
Turn around,
Face the fear of Passion!
Silent...

Is it love that you're thinking of when we are quiet?
Falling...
Silent...
Again.

© Ben Q., Marblehead, MA

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TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:45 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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\&quot;Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius. <br /> and its better to be absolutely ridiculous <br /> than absolutely boring.\&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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Okay this one literally almost brought tears to my eyes... it's fantastic :)
deleted said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:30 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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I love the dramatic feel your writing style has... it's really intense and addictive :)
DifferentTeen PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 10 2012 at 12:35 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
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Oh my, this is amazing! I can personally relate more to this poem. I've always held the belief that silence contains the secrets in life. I feel like this poem when I'm with my best friend on the bus, we talk for a while but then he kind of abruptly stops and just remains silent as he stares out the window listening to his music. I always wonder what hes thinking. And I think you put it into words, thank you!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 2:46 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thank you, Chase (: And YES. That most definitely IS possible. To love someone who doesn't know you do.
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 2:45 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thank you so much, Chloe ^^ You are so sweet and I love your comments^^
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:29 am
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
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Face the fear of Passion! 5/5
Wonderment DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:21 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Wow. It littearly haunts me. I love your use of epithets. Wonderful. 5/5 stars and thsi one is going in my favs too.
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 3:07 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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oooo i like this one! =) my favorite lines are "Whisper again, / Are all your secrets screaming?" and "Is it love that you're thinking of when we are quiet?" very good job, i think i'm putting this one on my favorites! 5/5
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:16 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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I really like the stanza that says "Softly this heart longs... For you... What lies in your eyes? Oh, my love... Remember who I am, So gently falling... Captured." You just write so beautifully. Definitely 5/5
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:03 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thanks so much! ^^ this one didn't seen so good to me at first, but I guess it is! (:
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 10:58 am
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This is my favorite of yours, so far! You say so much with so little words... its beautiful!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 7:48 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thanks(: so much
JoyfulCheers SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 7:31 pm
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
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this is realy good, like it.
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 2:24 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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thamks so much! I appreciate that my work is appreciated ^^
.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 5:35 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡&deg;)

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"Falling... Silent... Again. " Beautiful, It's nice sad, questionable, and I like the graceful style !
Luna3952 SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 6:30 pm
Luna3952 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
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Filled with passion!!!! AMAZING!!!! LOVE IT!!!!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 7:34 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thanks so much^^
InvisibleHeart GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 7:30 pm
InvisibleHeart GOLD, Barony, Other
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This is so good. I feel like I am actually in a situation and this is happening to me! Love it 5/5 golden stars for you!
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 6:14 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
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WOW. JUST WOW. 5/5, awesome job!
Emma-Riley PLATINUM said...
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good job! (: super awesome luv it