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The Way You Make Me Feel

February 15, 2012
By dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
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dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope will never be silent'

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When I see you, I want to kiss you
When you leave, all I want to do is be wrapped up in your arms
When you text me “Hey beautiful,” I blush
When you tell me you want to be with me, I get butterflies
When you tell me you want to hug me, I can feel your touch
When we make a plan to hang out, I can go from depressed to happy
in a matter of seconds
When I found out you’re a lesbian, I thanked God, and grew excited
When you asked me out, I felt like I was the luckiest girl on earth
When we played 20 questions I was anxious for your reply
When I told you about my horrible secrets, I was afraid you
wouldn’t like me anymore.

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dancer25 GOLD said...
on May. 24 2012 at 12:01 pm
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hope will never be silent&#039;

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thank you soo much it means alot to me
dancer25 GOLD said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 5:17 pm
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hope will never be silent&#039;

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well i hope you would lol
hellothereimawkward BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 5:13 pm
hellothereimawkward BRONZE, Lindenhurst, New York
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&quot;There&#039;s daggers in men&#039;s smiles&quot;

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I like this one!
SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 9:01 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Wow great Job! You are an amazing writer! You should publish this poem!:)
Aginger GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2012 at 10:37 pm
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
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This is a great rendition of a classic love poem. Nice job! I think it would be even better if you added more to the ending as well. I would love it if you could read and give feedback on my poem "Forever." Thank you, and well done!