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Wings

February 10, 2012
By Ekf07 GOLD, Huntersville, North Carolina
Ekf07 GOLD, Huntersville, North Carolina
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“The expert at anything was once a beginner.All writers are crazy. So never mind what the editors, your family and your critique group tells you. Submit your manuscripts and keep submitting until you get an offer. Then you can be crazy, with a payc


Wings

Soaring through
Thunder, Rain, Sun
Their feathers flap and glide.
The sun on their back,
Only the sky around them.

Wings hold them up,
Let them fly and soar.
Let them get to the freedom they need.

Wings keep them going
Through the darkest nights,
To the brightest days.
Sends them to majestic places,
To their love.



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on Feb. 27 2012 at 9:43 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,<br /> Not all those who wander are lost;<br /> The old that is strong does not wither,<br /> Deep roots are not reached by the frost.<br /> From the ashes a fire shall be woken,<br /> A light from the shadows shall spring;<br /> Renewed shall be blade that was broken,<br /> The crownless again shall be king.

I love the imagery!! The only thing I would change is the word 'get'. It kind of interrupts the flow. Otherwise the poem is flawless and beautiful!