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The Dark Red Shore

March 9, 2012
By Ariya GOLD, Charleston, South Carolina
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Ariya GOLD, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some men just want to watch the world burn.<br /> -Alfred (Batman Begins)

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The night is dark
A woman screams
Her daughter cries
The mother dies
The little girl runs
He catches her up
She can't get away
Despite all her tries
The man ends her
She lay there still
She is no more
On that red shore

The author's comments:
I was trying to find a way to use a poem with short thoughts to make people feel a little bit fearful.
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Ariya GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2012 at 9:35 pm
Ariya GOLD, Charleston, South Carolina
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Thanks thats what I was going for.
Kinzi GOLD said...
on Mar. 15 2012 at 7:59 am
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&ldquo;There is some good in this world, and it&#039;s worth fighting for.&rdquo; -J.R.R. Tolkien<br /> <br /> &ldquo;I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more love.&rdquo; -Mother Teresa

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Short, choppy, and succinct. It's like a brief scene from a movie, book, or tv show, and it definitely makes the reader wonder what happened. Good job!