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me and you

March 19, 2012
By gb12197 PLATINUM, Bridgeport, Pennsylvania
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&quot;next time you feel like a failure, think about how you are alive, and you have the opportunity to be successful.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;i don&#039;t have an attitude, i have a personality you can&#039;t handle&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;i am weird&quot;

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You are awkwardly perfect.
You are sweet and sensitive.
You are outgoing and talkative
You're amazing and I know it.

Me, I am scared and wounded.
I am sad and then I am happy.
I have issues all around.
When I am with you, I know I will get through it

Me and you could be perfect.
Me and you we could work like this
You understand me, and I understand you.
I love us together, me and you.

© Lauren G., Pompton Plains, NJ

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Jessi_suarez1 GOLD said...
on Apr. 10 2012 at 8:44 pm
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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i love the first two lines! but from there i kinda feel it got kinda weak. make sure that when u start out that strong u carry through ur whole poem. other then that, good job!