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Everytime, I close my eyes

March 25, 2012
By Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Its been three days,
since i last had you,
in my life.
since the last time I felt you holding me,
loving me,
being with me.
And I just can't seem to,
forget about you.
Every Time I close my eyes,
you come right back to the for-fount of mind,
every time I close my eyes,
I see us in my head.
Every Time I close my eyes,
I resit the urge to cry.
Every Time I close my eyes,
I just wish you weren't side,
because the truth of it all,
the truth of all,
hurts more than the lies.
because truth is I want you back,
and I know you don't want me.
I guess I,
Just want to put the past in the past.
So I hope that,
this time,
when I close my eyes,
I don't see you.

© Jessica F., Bradford, MA

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RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2013 at 8:21 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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wonderment...how have u been???
BuggyorTbug said...
on May. 15 2012 at 11:18 am
BuggyorTbug, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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I love love love it wonder :) <3

 

-Taylor

carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 3:30 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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this is amazing wonder
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 5 2012 at 10:14 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The only people who don&#039;t get anywhere are the people who don&#039;t dream of a better place for themselves...

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This is so very good. And extremely emotional. I know what you're talking about and who this is for... Great my love(:
Joshua. GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 7:11 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?&quot; - Hunter S Tompson

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Very good :)

 

HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 6:13 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can&#039;t pick sorry

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Beautiful just beautiful every word and quote :) great work Wonder