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Metaphor For Us

April 11, 2012
By Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sui.icide is not cowardly. What is cowardly is making somebody hurt so much they want to kill themselves.&quot; Ashley Purdy<br /> &quot;Money can&#039;t buy happiness, but it can buy bacon, and thats pretty much the same thing.&quot; Andy Biersack<br /> &quot;Your not alone&quot; Andy B


If I am the stars
then you are the sky
holding me up
teaching me to fly
if I am a fish,
then you are the sea.
Whenever in embrace,
We are all we can be.
If I am a heart,
then you are my soul.
Holding me together,
keeping me whole.
So if you are you,
and I am me,
Then together as one,
we will always be.


The author's comments:
This is written about a guy that I am currently dating. I originally just showed it to my friends, but they convinced me to post, so here it is!

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leafy said...
on Jun. 4 2012 at 10:03 am
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: I hate it.&nbsp;<br /> Gil: You haven&#039;t even read it yet.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: If it&#039;s bad, I&#039;ll hate it. If it&#039;s good, then I&#039;ll be envious and hate it even more. You don&#039;t want the opinion of another writer.&nbsp;

Haha I definitely sensed some Zechy-ness in this poem, even before I read the Author's Note ;). Anywhos, great poem! Usually I don't really like rhyming, but this was good ^_^